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| I took the existing info and aspects of my bad ad and re-design/re-arranged things to portray a clearer message. Also I felt the advertisement needed to breath more and be more exciting. The centered type is boring and an easy fix to an ad that could have be worked on more. I think a lot more roughs need to be generated to make the ad work but I got some good versions of this ad out of this exercise. |
About Me
- Samrokk
- Lomita, CA, United States
- My name is Sam but my nickname's Samrokk. I was born in Redondo Bch and go to El Camino for Graphic Design. I'm almost done with my certificate in graphic design, as well as, my AA in Studio art. I'm a freelance designer and photographer and one day I hope to own a small company, or art gallery. I have a certificate in CPR and First Aid from fall 2010. My advertising blog is for my Advertising 2 course, my photography blog is just something I wanted to put up to show my work and create potential customers and is the start of my online portfolio. This blogs purpose is to generate constructive criticism and positive feedback in order to improve the quality and accuracy of the information in my advertisements, as well as, my photography.
Monday, February 21, 2011
Redesigning the Bad Ad in the last post (10 Thumbnails+Original Layout)
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Sam, you have to work out how to layer the advertisement without destroying the minimal look? you can crop the image or enlarge.
ReplyDeletehere is the suggested hierarchy
1. girl
2. slogan
3. image of sunscreen
4. tag line beauty of sun protection
5. paragraph
Couple more roughs please - they can be digital
angela